report 18.07: draft v0.9 editorial nit-picking, take-2. 27/14327/1
authorMaciek Konstantynowicz <mkonstan@cisco.com>
Fri, 17 Aug 2018 22:00:26 +0000 (23:00 +0100)
committerMaciek Konstantynowicz <mkonstan@cisco.com>
Fri, 17 Aug 2018 22:00:26 +0000 (23:00 +0100)
Change-Id: Id2a627b1e48275f505a3ea50004285516a47897e
Signed-off-by: Maciek Konstantynowicz <mkonstan@cisco.com>
docs/report/introduction/introduction.rst
docs/report/vpp_functional_tests/csit_release_notes.rst

index e08edc0..01108f1 100644 (file)
@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@ Introduction
 ============
 
 FD.io |csit-release| report contains system performance and functional
-testing data for |vpp-release|.
+testing data of |vpp-release|.
 
 `PDF version of this report`_ is also available for download.
 
 |csit-release| report is structured as follows:
 
-#. INTRODUCTION: General introduction to CSIT project.
+#. INTRODUCTION: General introduction to FD.io |csit-release|.
 
    - **Introduction**: This section.
    - **Test Scenarios Overview**: A brief overview of test scenarios
      covered in this report.
    - **Physical Testbeds**: Description of physical testbeds.
-   - **Performance Test Methodology**: Benchmarking methodologies.
+   - **Performance Test Methodology**: Benchmarking test methodologies.
 
 #. VPP PERFORMANCE: VPP performance tests executed in physical
    FD.io testbeds.
index f70ead3..2a39c87 100644 (file)
@@ -13,9 +13,9 @@ Changes in |csit-release|
    - Implementation of VIRL functional integration tests in
      VPP_make_test.
 
-   - All VIRL tests identified by FD.io VPP and CSIT projects as
-     Priority-0 ported to VPP_make_test.
-     Ref. `CSIT_VIRL migration progress
+   - All VIRL tests identified as Priority-0 by FD.io VPP and CSIT
+     projects have been ported to VPP_make_test. Detailed breakdown in
+     `CSIT_VIRL migration progress
      <https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1PciV8XN9v1qHbIRUpFJoqyES29_vik7lcFDl73G1usc/edit?usp=sharing>`_.
 
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